Title: This Charming Man
Author: Ajax Bell
Publisher: Jugum Press
Publication Date: November 1st 2014
Series or Standalone: A Queen City Boys #1
Format: Paperback, 358 pages
Source: eCopy from the Publisher via NetGalley
WILL SEATTLE MAKE A MAN OF HIM YET?
It’s 1991 and Steven Frazier has danced away half a decade in the Seattle club scene with his beautiful-but-poisonous best friend, Adrian. Two glittering princes against the world, too high above life to care about what they might be missing. But everything changes when a chance meeting with older—not to mention handsome— businessman John Pieters, reveals a cosmopolitan world and possible futures Steven’s never considered.
Flashy club clothes won’t impress John, this charming man who knows so much about many things. Motivated by fantasies inspired by his crush on John, can Steven finally fight Adrian’s sick hold? As he steps out into the larger world, supported by new friends, Steven must prove to John—and to himself—that he’s not a hedonistic rhinestone club kid, but a true diamond in the rough.
I just can’t. Honestly, I already wanted to put this down at 15% and go on with another book. But since I requested this title on netgalley and the publisher approved it. I don’t wanna be rude by not finishing it and I can’t just review it as it is. Because I never rate and review DNFed books.
“Do you believe in love at first sight?”
“Why? Did you fall in love with John when you first saw him? Or did you wait until you heard him speak French?”
“What? No. Ridiculous. I’m wondering if he fell in love with me. At first sight.”
Our hero, Steven Frazier is a 25-year-old college student who acts like a 9-year-old girl whenever his crush is around. His infatuation over John throughout the book is seriously killing me. This may seem harsh but it made me want to punch him right in his face just to make him stop. I can’t stand seeing this adult character does teenage stuff. Fantasizing John all day and night long and having this freaking huge crush problem which is I’m-just-me-and-he’s-perfect thing. Please, stop doing that. It’s not helping.
The slow burn romance is poorly handled. It is very unrealistic with the characters; John who is 44 and obviously old enough not to make the flirting and teasing long and of course, Steven who loves to hook up even with his friends. That it takes 259 pages, that’s 81%, for them to confess their feelings and share their first kisses. Urgh.
Everything is almost voice out, with them always talking that no one will seem to care about. Especially if there’s no development to the conversation. And the other characters giving Steven the same advice all over again. That’s tiresome, actually.
Lastly, it bothers me that being high or hooking up with your friends in the story delivered in a manner that it is okay and acceptable. I’m badly waiting for their realization that the things they did in the past were mistakes. But the story ends with them just laughing it off. What? No, I can’t accept that.